Clute, The Facts
Title of Entry:
Chasing Butterflies
Category:
10 - Feature Series
Entrant information:
John Lowman
Judges Comments:
Chasing butterflies: A powerful story. An extremely well-written narrative with enough information about the topic to put the woman's grief, and her passage through it, into perspective.
2: The vivid description of how the memory of the death of her brother still brings out raw emotion in the sister is brutal, and riveting. Great writing.
3: Story could have been shorter and more tightly focused on the father. Not really enough to carry a whole third day.
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