Bryan-College Station Eagle
Title of Entry:
The true story of Rudolph
Category:
11 - Short Features
Entrant information:
Vimal Patel
Judges Comments:
Great new angle on a Christmas feature. Vimal doesn't fall back on cliches, and creatively breezes through a lead that's loaded with story elements. Each clause tells a story of reindeer life, and doesn't belabor the point. The "Christmas card" quote is fun, an excellent choice for the story's only quote, and a nice piece of history to weave in. I would have liked to keep reading Vimal's lighter take on the other facts, but the job was done well already.
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